因为原文比较多错而且有人要中文，所以特别改正，顺便俾篇劣作大家交流下英文
It's a good idea that Ray wants to help all of us improve our english by setting up the English corner,
but I don't think that it is helpful right now , because there are so many Chinese-English in the
English corner.
Ray 想通过设立E个 English corner 提高我地噶英语水平系一个好主意，不过我唔认为E+会有用，因为系个English corner里面有太多中式英语！
Many of us just use Chinese-English in the English corner.
我地之中好多人都只系系English corner用中式英语。
In this way,we can only learn new words ,but we are still poor at grammar.
噤样噶话，我地只能够学到D新单词，但系我地系语法方面仍然唔掂
If we want to improve our English , we should correct the wrong sentences written by other vincy-fans.
如果我地想提高英语水平，我地应该修正其他泳迷写噶错句。
I think that it will be useful.
我估噤样应该会有帮助！
如果有D咩错希望提出啊！大家一齐进步！亦都希望English corner愈来愈旺
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本帖最后由 sandy 于 2008-4-25 07:10 PM 编辑 ]
